It's actually not bad. There are a few points though. To begin, I can tell exactly what you did right off the bat, which was a gradient black and white tool, probably, covered by a c4d. You then put the render and text. Go for something a bit less simple. Secondly, the text is very plain. It's also much too big. It makes it almost seem like a second render. Just keep practicing.
Subject: I made a sig 
Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:08 pm
